Okay, wow! Heavy, heavy stuff! Poor Uryuu! *cries for him* I don't normally even like Ishida, but this story made me so... angst for him! *oh noes!* Hold on Uryuu! Kurosaki is coming! I'm also glad you have the Ichigo/Uryuu pairing, I do like this one! I really can't wrap my head around a Renji/Ishida as a lot of other fics do...I see nothing between those two ever happening. (plus maybe I'm partial to Renji's other partner..hehe..) You definitely have a wonderful way of writing that allows the reader to follow and feel everything your protagonist is going through... great visual characterizations! I thoroughly enjoyed reading Uryuu's thoughts in the first person, it really brings you close and personal to the character. I look forward to more!
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Date: 2009-03-28 06:18 am (UTC)I'm also glad you have the Ichigo/Uryuu pairing, I do like this one! I really can't wrap my head around a Renji/Ishida as a lot of other fics do...I see nothing between those two ever happening. (plus maybe I'm partial to Renji's other partner..hehe..)
You definitely have a wonderful way of writing that allows the reader to follow and feel everything your protagonist is going through... great visual characterizations! I thoroughly enjoyed reading Uryuu's thoughts in the first person, it really brings you close and personal to the character.
I look forward to more!